Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn in the Universe of Hazbin Hotel and Helluva Boss

much better than the old weird mc.

was good but the intro felt drawn out by the time we had a scene change it was super far into the chapter think we spent to much time on him pulling himself together then the actual story and I think putting the story further into the helluva boss storyline is it kinda takes away some writing material

W keep it coming

good introduction, more understandable than the first and also a good part of the chapter in helluva boss to make them interact, just one thing though, will you still publish the rewrite together with the previous one or will you do it separately?

what will the name of fanfic?

make charlie morningstar the female lead please author

Tftc

is this guy gay or straight? i dont get it.