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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry potter :Stifen Grindelwald

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Dragon5162
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Conversations should be the only thing that use "talking" while thoughts should use 'think'. By doing so you make it easier to tell when someone is thinking or talking.

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OverlordBGs
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Nice chapter

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Anas_AsBEIY
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شكرا على الفصل

Zero616
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I find it very disturbing that a 28-year-old man lives like a child without having problems, it's okay, you're an orphan but that doesn't mean that you lived 28 years, it always seemed stupid to me from all the authors

DRACONIAN619
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thanks again for the really great chapter and thank you for all of your really hard work on this really great and exciting story

Gh0st00
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honestly can't read this no more it is aggravating to even try to understand where the conversations are and where he's actually just thinking in his mind not talking wrong words used misspelled words incorrectly use words I just can't read it and enjoy the story you need to get grammarly or somebody that has English as a primary language or something to edit your chapters