Comments of chapter undefined of The Moonlight Swordsman

😀 just keep posting coments buddy, it helps me know about my mistakes , how my readers feels towards my story, as you have noticed from chapter 1 thay i am improving my writing little by little, after doing my job , i focused on research and learn many things online. In the Part 2 it's gonna be more lively , the characters will feel more alive along the world building. 😀

I'm honestly disappointed that MC is still allowing himself to be a pawn like this with all the hints he was given. He knows what people of that world are like, Daisy warned him not to trust anyone and he doesn't even stop to think how the Paul family found him so quickly. He has all the reasons to suspect Leah and Alisha, but he's still the same naïve man-boy who got tricked by Larisa.