Comments of chapter undefined of Divine Ascension: A Journey As A Black Hole
Divine Ascension: A Journey As A Black Hole
DraculaSwift
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KobbyTheunknownLv2KobbyTheunknown
The story reminds me of my first stories, fast paced. I like that but some people don't like fast paced story, I'm not saying make it long, but if you could find a way to stay on a point, like explaining the scenery, extra details etc
KobbyTheunknownLv2KobbyTheunknown
I'm not very good at brainstorming when half asleep, so might pick this up, when I am fully awake and free
KobbyTheunknown:So in other words, you want a god for Dracula to absorb, maybe have him ho through the Norse and Greek mythologies, or if you want to be original, you could have a god of 'light holes', a god of 'time', a god of 'planets', etcetera