Comments of chapter undefined of Divine Ascension: A Journey As A Black Hole
Divine Ascension: A Journey As A Black Hole
DraculaSwift
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KobbyTheunknownLv2KobbyTheunknown
The story reminds me of my first stories, fast paced. I like that but some people don't like fast paced story, I'm not saying make it long, but if you could find a way to stay on a point, like explaining the scenery, extra details etc
KobbyTheunknownLv2KobbyTheunknown
So in other words, you want a god for Dracula to absorb, maybe have him ho through the Norse and Greek mythologies, or if you want to be original, you could have a god of 'light holes', a god of 'time', a god of 'planets', etcetera
DraculaSwift:I am constructing an Omniverse in my AI chip, and the central figure in this universe is Dracula as the god. I aim to make him extremely powerful, so the story can progress quickly. In each universe within my Omniverse, every time a character becomes a god, Dracula becomes stronger, allowing him to absorb more black holes and escape being trapped this is my main focus.