Comments of chapter undefined of Divine Ascension: A Journey As A Black Hole
Divine Ascension: A Journey As A Black Hole
DraculaSwift
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KobbyTheunknownLv2KobbyTheunknown
The story reminds me of my first stories, fast paced. I like that but some people don't like fast paced story, I'm not saying make it long, but if you could find a way to stay on a point, like explaining the scenery, extra details etc
KobbyTheunknownLv2KobbyTheunknown
Could make the character resemble some one the MC is comfortable with, and the person pops up from time to time to explain things and comment on what MC is doing. Kinda like Lucifer in SM
DraculaSwift:I'm creating a character to serve as the main deity in my Omniverse and I want to ensure they embody the power and significance of a supreme being. Can you provide some suggestions to help enhance this concept??