Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of the Common Devil [DXD FanFic]

I hope he doesn't become a servant to anyone's peerage

Thanks for another wonderful chapter, it's going to be amusing if he sprouts his wings and finds he now not only has multiple pairs but all on one side are now angel wings + a halo. xD

it’s very strange that you didn’t show us the reaction of his environment to changes in his appearance ... he changed a lot ... (not a word about eyes and hair. Or did Google not translate and show it? ..). also, please, you can normally indicate his age (otherwise it is not entirely clear how old he is. at first they said that he was ten or younger (they did not say the exact age), and then they began to count the time after rebirth. because of this, I still I don't know how old he is). it’s better to count the time from his birth and not reincarnation (especially when we don’t know how old he was then ... you just wrote assumptions about how old he was when he woke up)

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter :))