LordOrpheus
I love your book. Don't let the negative comments affect you. Your book is wonderfull so far, in fact it is more of a book then the fast paced little storys fanfic's normaly are, and that is probably the point some of us readers complain in the first place. Stay yourself and do what you like with your story. It is your fantasy and imagination we are all enjoing here, not the other way around.