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Comments of chapter undefined of Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

LazyCorpz
LazyCorpzLv11LazyCorpz

This just felt like a big info dump in the middle of 2 cliffhangers

BrightestDay
BrightestDayLv15BrightestDay

I’m sorry but what does this have to do with the current chapters? Sweet we have aliens now but this is taking away from the UN conflict.

adam_redleaf
adam_redleafLv13adam_redleaf

I was pretty sure you were going to add aliens to the story eventually, but I thought it would be after he ruled over earth openly or at least in secret through reprogramming the leaders by offering upgrades in body and mind like he does with his soldiers and employees. As long as you don't give the aliens FTL drives so distance still matters, this will give Aron a deadline and the motivation to improve that he would otherwise lack since he has conquered more than enough space and power for himself and his loved ones. Without a threat, he could focus only on eden/esparia, making them the #1 power on earth easily before the story caught up to today, but with the threat of alien invasion, he will be forced to reveal and spread his tech widely depending on how close they are and how fast they travel.

southgamez
southgamezLv15southgamez

should have finished off with the UN debacle before pushing these two chapters

D_Con
D_ConLv15D_Con

skipped most of this, lost absolutely nothing and saved a bunch of time. This is called filler.

hun_hunun
hun_hununLv12hun_hunun

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ilovespicytuna
ilovespicytunaLv12ilovespicytuna

What type of Inception Guy Ritchie flashback is this? Flash back in a flash back? Not even done well.