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Comments of chapter undefined of In Danmachi as Arthur Leywin

PolAr_BeAR
PolAr_BeARLv14PolAr_BeAR

i liked the interaction between the astrea familia but be careful with the expidition. İf they are bıt gonna be really close friends or if hes not gonna join their familia it could be problematic

Ozenn
OzennLv2Ozenn

I don't think it's a good choice for him to join them. If he joins, he will hide his strength, and that will slow down his growth. I think it's a very stupid and hasty choice.

ThreshGasm
ThreshGasmLv4ThreshGasm

author i suggest you rewrite the last 2 chapters, the way he got exposed so early to a group who aren't part of his familia and neither are they the top 2 familia of orario is really bad . I mean he just got into orario not even a month has passed this is to rushed

Alef_Biersack
Alef_BiersackLv2Alef_Biersack

this one is already very strong, and it will only get stronger the story will not be funny at all, will it be one of those stories where the MC will be taking care of the old protagonist? Will there be any difference in canon events or a repeat with the MC showing how much stronger he is than anyone there.

Arthur90
Arthur90Lv1Arthur90

Vaya esto fue un poco decepcionante

Tevin_Persinger
Tevin_PersingerLv15Tevin_Persinger

Did author forget gods can lock their children status so others cant see?

Wereas
WereasLv2Wereas

No entiendo porque utilizo la carta de exponerte , es que quería el autor quería abrir la ruta de oranus(gremio) para misiones de gremio que le ayude a crecer financieramente (recursos) o solo salvarlo porque si ( partes de Harén -como ryu ?) Esa parte no la señala en autor que quiere hacer al exponerse un poco contradictorio no tiene falma pero deja que un dios lo veo su poder sin falma , no tiene el poder del padre de Ais para poder ir contra otros dioses o antecedentes (recarnaciin de héroes anteriores que los dioses sabes quién son ) ( Loki se llevó casi la mayoría de recarnaciin su equipo principal son ellos ).

Eliias_Galarza
Eliias_GalarzaLv1Eliias_Galarza

Hola buenas jaja yo molestando Jaja no entiendo porque no universitario a una familia si lo que quiere es a ser se mas fuerte y tener apollo me parese muy estupido frenar su crecimiento manteniéndose sin familia me parese muy arrogante de su parte aser eso

Shurikgal
ShurikgalLv2Shurikgal

Thanks for the chapter

Glitch_8959
Glitch_8959Lv1Glitch_8959

Thx for the chapter.

DaoistoSXxRV
DaoistoSXxRVLv4DaoistoSXxRV

thanks for the chapter

ThiccThighs
ThiccThighsLv11ThiccThighs

Thx for chap

ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv4ArdaPendragon

Thanks for chapter.

Merlin58
Merlin58Lv2Merlin58

TFTC