Comments of chapter undefined of No More Pain For This Villain.

No More Pain For This Villain.

Satan03

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MageloverilynoahLv1Mageloverilynoah

Huge spaces in between the lines/paragraphs why? it doesnt matter for me since i have reader mode on but maybe you should fix it? Also why is the thoughts in quotes when its in first person? it confuses me on whether or not he is talking or thinking. Fix this and ur novel will be plenty better!! I am still liking it tho

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I_O_O_ILv4I_O_O_I

Man this is edgy beyond belief but I'm kind of intrigued.

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suryansh_TripathiLv12suryansh_Tripathi

consider me hooked

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Chen_chnLv4Chen_chn

Good start , give u that

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warriorofnorthLv15warriorofnorth

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kjxudvcLv13kjxudvc

❤❤

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Read_hd_chanLv15Read_hd_chan

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Lord_Gr1mmLv15Lord_Gr1mm

there are so many inconsistencies in the story so far that hits hard to count xd

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HakkiraLv14Hakkira

Thank you kindly for the chapter 😁

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Sozue_NouzenLv14Sozue_Nouzen

Drama!!!

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Vishesh_Verma_2386Lv3Vishesh_Verma_2386

Women ☕

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OverlordBGsLv14OverlordBGs

Great chapter

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