Comments of chapter undefined of No More Pain For This Villain.

No More Pain For This Villain.

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Tabac_AdrianLv2Tabac_Adrian

The cringefest is over 9000. Author tries to hard to be edgy, instead comes as a cringe. There is no logic. Just like a previous member said, the edge lord kill that guy family, friends, associates , neigbours,dogs, yet he asks why the maffia boss killed edge lord family in return. Dafuq? Author, do you actualy read what you write? And this is just chapter one, and it gave me cringe shivers

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Satan03AuthorSatan03

was new when I wrote,this....got better now, everyone has to start somewhere right?

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antmanFNLv13antmanFN

Bro said he killed his whole family and all his friends but jasmine and his parents didn't have to die😂😂

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ZtaDydLv4ZtaDyd

the first chapter does not seem like a book but rather a fantasy of greatness that a teenager has in his mind

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Tunic01Lv15Tunic01

The storytelling is awful... The author was trying to make it cool and dark, but it just sounded like some 13 year old kids cringe thoughts.

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OverlordBGsLv14OverlordBGs

Great chapter

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HL0426Lv3HL0426

after adding a " please make the first letter capital

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Cold_worksLv3Cold_works

A glorious death indeed 👑👑

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❤❤

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Tanbir_Islam_2582Lv3Tanbir_Islam_2582

this chapter gave me goosebumps imagining that scene

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