Comments of chapter undefined of Fate/Disturbance

I like the start of this, looking forward to more.

Your writing is really good, just hope it doesn't get too dramatic in the future

Off to a good start. I feel like this was inspired from that one fate FF because of the start.

will there be a harem?

why the removal from history books???

Thanks for the chapter

This urgently needs a correction, many authors do not pay attention but the 5 initial chapters define whether the reader will continue to read the story or not.

I think I've seen this before?

Love the start👍👍👍

Thanks for chapter.

Thanks for the chapter.

the larp is real

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Thank you for the chapter 🥰

Gud

Hyped for more!!!

TFTC

Thanks for the chapter