Addyctive7
first you give him a solid background with a loving girlfriend then you suddenly go oh i didnt have much anyways, hope she is alright, now lets go marvel! imo you shouldve skipped that intro and gone straight for the insert. i dont think ive ever read a good intro before the insert, ever, even amongst the better SI stories
Have you thought about Alex reuniting with Janette. I can imagine a she being somehow reincarnated as a female symbiote. Maybe he would run into her into one of the other Earths. This would be a very interesting scenario. I’m wondering if a Symbiote could form a bond with another without devouring it.