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Comments of chapter undefined of Another Arc on Remnant

Lastp
LastpLv10Lastp

like the story so far but its your work as long as you enjoy the story it will show

ArkNova
ArkNovaLv1ArkNova

Go for it BUT please this time don't pair him up with anyone in CRDL

Leylin_Farlier99
Leylin_Farlier99Lv14Leylin_Farlier99

well, I'll be looking forward to it.

George_WEB
George_WEBLv6George_WEB

why It was Good that way 😭😭But if it is a remake , you could change things like make an AU with jaune being a girl Like joan arc from fate and Roan being the only brother in the Family đŸ€”Or make some of the main cast of rwby have an extra sibling 🧐

Reader_Who_Reads
Reader_Who_ReadsLv13Reader_Who_Reads

Looking forward to it!

blackNoah
blackNoahLv4blackNoah

ok, pero si vas hacer una historia donde blacke es la heroina, mi sugerencia es que el mc comience a viajar por el mundo a la edad de 10 años, luego a los 11 años salva a blacke en una revuelta que sucede en atlas y de paso se hacen amigos de weis y envian a la carcel a su padre y ponen a winter como la nueva dueña y a su madre en rehabilitacion, todo con el hecho de que el mc es 3 años mayor que jaune

omnigamergt
omnigamergtLv4omnigamergt

sure looking forward t the rewrite

starfart111
starfart111Lv14starfart111

well hope it gets done and Author is happy with rewrite....sad to see so many get dropped when a rewrite happens

DaoistJRiBtk
DaoistJRiBtkLv1DaoistJRiBtk

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Poshspooder
PoshspooderLv14Poshspooder

This was great, but can only ge better. I’m looking forward to the rewrite

blackNoah
blackNoahLv4blackNoah

que tal si lo mandas al mc con un sistema de super deduccion, donde lo mandas al momento donde es un feto, luego que dedusca un metodo de desbloque genetico para que adquiera nuevos genes positivo ( genes alpha, refuerso interno, ojo de la mente, etc) y un metodo de absorcion optimizada de cph4 para que pueda desarrollar su cerebro hasta el 20%, si viste la pelicula lucy entonces entenderas porque es necesario eso y por que solo eso, tengan encuenta que albert eisten tiene 160 de ao

CILinkz
CILinkzLv2CILinkz

yeah it didnt really make sense that he goes off galivanting around remnant with his father when he was accepted into beacon.

Genesis_Primordial
Genesis_PrimordialLv4Genesis_Primordial

aw what no i love these chapters author!

Kevin_Valentin
Kevin_ValentinLv1Kevin_Valentin

Rewrite it all you want just please don't drop this like your other story I liked that one

GenosForce
GenosForceLv2GenosForce

It was so good

antonio_montenegro
antonio_montenegroLv3antonio_montenegro

Noooooo bueno lo q sea, toca esperar tonce

flea23
flea23Lv14flea23

just don't drop it like others do man

Spearow0
Spearow0Lv3Spearow0

hope jaune just dies on the rework, the story was more about put him down and make fun of him above anything else.