Munchkin123
It really feels like someone just put this through Google translator. It's hard to read.
I came this far in reading. I don’t want to criticize or leave a bad review but, the translation does not even reach 6 years old child speaking and understanding . Maybe that’s me!
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Good storyling, good character development keep working on translating , editing , and vocabulary .