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Comments of chapter undefined of Providence of the Heavenly Flame

Novicey
NoviceyLv15Novicey

And this is where I stop. I honestly enjoyed the beginning of the novel and don't really have any bad reason that's making me drop. It's just a difference in preference, I guess. I'm getting pretty bored with the slow pacing. it wasn't too bad at first, but slow novels just aren't my thing. I guess the mc being a bit too normal is also another reason. The lack of difference between him and other characters so far is pretty limited besides the gold flame.

ShiroN3K0
ShiroN3K0AuthorShiroN3K0

Thanks for the feedback, I agree that the pacing is a bit slow I've been trying to fight the 'Asspull' feeling by slowly developing the MC but unfortunately making that interesting at the same time is a bit hard. We'll that's why I'm writing to improve I guess.