Comments of chapter undefined of The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

Completely baffled as to when we are supposed to grow to love the ML. When are we going to see the relationship between them grow. there isn't even a hint of affection. Needs an editor, poor Grammer, spelling, etc.. the character growth is lacking. At this point in the novel, we should be at the turning point.

The Male lead is gross. He suffered, so sad. so now he a rapist and it’s justified? Are you insane? Grammar, tenses snd pronouns all need fixing. Chaptets are embarrassingly short. GET AN EDITOR. Write better characters

what now? he has a mistress and now he has a mate?

So in this world they don’t feel the pull after being marked?

I don't want to know about any other character especially her brother, moreover I want the story to focus on the female lead rather then male one

Guilty