Comments of chapter undefined of Percy Jackson : The Odyssey of a Primordial.

you have good ideas and your writing is ok and sometimes unique but the forced fast romance in your stories make the plot lose so much good luck with your story but like your last one you destroy this one too cause of forced fast pace romance totally the last 2 chapters the Mc is so put of character

Now that I think about it Hera was always going on about how she hated demi-gods because they were born out of wedlock, so maybe if some gods had actually chosen to marry their mortal lovers she might not have been so angry. With Zeus, he always went behind her back and he never acknowledged or introduced any of the women he slept to her or into the relationship officially, therefore breaking and damaging her domain regularly because of him being her husband. There are Gods that are married to more than one or two wives so even if he marries Hera, Hestia will still have a chance I hope.

Thanks for the chapter. I don’t really care for romance. It takes away from story progression. Example: This chapter, only one night passed, he made a universe for a woman he just met, and then they danced…

TFTC

I think you should have made them friends first, then they would fall in love during the titanomachy , not love at first sight

No one ever picks Hestia 😭

Ok not gonna lie, this made me like Hera a lot more

tftc but can we please finally have a complete fic

isn't she too weak tho in comparison to him and his family.

I kinda feel upset with the idea of choosing Hera as the love interest because of my awareness of what real mythological Hera was like. But then again, the Greek pantheon is well-known for its immoral feats. Though I feel upset, it does not mean that I want the author to change their mind. It is your story after all.

Author… this was BEAUTIFUL

Welcome back and thanks for the chapter and I just have to say I love the idea of him and hera together

you ruined your book with this kind of romance,I'm gonna stop reading this

super rush romance

Thanks for the chapter.

Muito bom esse romance deles de início espero que continue, acho que ela foi muito injustiçada pelas mãos de Zeus, seria melhor com ele Obrigado pelo capítulo

TFTC🤙🖖

If you add that the gods also sleep, you can edit that the mc influenced Hera through dreams, and the mc is interested in her, for the simple reason that he wants to take Zeus's wife, a great pleasure for any reincarnator.

I was really liking this fic a lot, it's a shame that they put romance in it, also with hera. Without offending those who like it, I respect their tastes, but I still don't like that woman.