SeraphWedd
this is an honest question, was this last part with that noble necessary? Making him as a overweight power-abusing kind that immediately ordered the guards to kill the MC and take his women, and even out in the public.Just why?
Not only that but nobles in medieval time periods believed that robust appearances showed their wealth and power as slaves, endentured servants, and peasants were often really skinny. They often would take random women and children to warm their beds and groom them to be their wives once they turned into "adults"
SeraphWedd:He is relevant to building MC's personality later on. So I think, yes?