Comments of chapter undefined of I Am The Game's Villain

Author I don't know what to say. It just mc felt pathetic .

You said you loved her yet you can't even respect her memories in front of her brother. Glad she died, cuz you don't deserve her. Guess I know now you deserve to be unhappy and I would like it if it would be forever.

The MC is an absolute loser, there is no reason why'd he have to purposely antagonize his friend, that's scum behavior

Why did MC act like that?

I don’t get the MC.

I think i know what the MC meant MC Iintention: She not my girlfriend but...she is my wife *he then hand him a wedding ring* then pulls out a gun out of his short then (the MC) aim it has own head with is gun then bam 💥 that what truly happines...

Dialogue felt... unfinished. Choppy at worse as a few things just didn't make grammatical sense or help connect a scene transition properly

Hmm Don't get mc scum action but let's see

Thanks for the chapter

The writing is a little all over the place and dialogues are broken... but I hope it improves over the time.And Author-san you need a editor...otherwise I'm eager to explore the story...

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you know what ? l actually love this. for once the character getting thrown into another world as a villain is actually atleast slightly villain like.

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are all the writers on this app retards? every story on here all read like it was written by toddler's