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Comments of chapter undefined of Road to becoming the wealthiest: Starting From Treasure Hunting in the Cabinets

JohnDeuz
JohnDeuzLv13JohnDeuz

i came for 'zhu yu' but i got 'sean knight'? i guess description/synopsis can be a scam too huh? welp good luck, bravo 6 out!! O7

Genpsalmsky
GenpsalmskyLv14Genpsalmsky

Better get an editor, so that they can help you on correcting minor issues.

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smylie
smylieLv15smylie

Paragraphs are not optional; they are necessary. The only breaks are randomly in the middle of words.

fonji
fonjiLv5fonji

How do people read novels like this I'm not saying the novel is bad but i won't read it because of the way it is arranged too much stress for me. 😬

Fall_First
Fall_FirstLv2Fall_First

another trash another copy paste. zero effort only exist due to bribe.

Meanychan
MeanychanLv13Meanychan

Needs to be edited and proofreading. Missing spaces and line breaks. It was a bit difficult to read and takes the fun out of reading because it's literally making my eyes and head hurt. Not criticizing the writing but just my take so far with the chapter.

Tibbles
TibblesLv15Tibbles

I mean I do not normally like it when Chinese authors butcher American culture but this seems alright so far

JunkPileKeeper
JunkPileKeeperLv12JunkPileKeeper

it's hard to read

Mayaluna
MayalunaLv14Mayaluna

thanks for the chapter

felix7
felix7Lv4felix7

bro spacing is important

DaoistnrKflM
DaoistnrKflMLv15DaoistnrKflM

I like it so far. 😏

Gumpta
GumptaLv4Gumpta

I can get into it, he gets an x ray ability from the jade ok, I can really enjoy this if you also let him learn magic and not just depend on artifacts, does not have to be crazy or anything if you dod not want to go high fantasy but your adding magic items so it would be cool, just cool life inprovement stuff like cleaning house magic cooking , building stuff like buildings or mechinacal stuff , self protecting spells, and also add ways to improve physical body like with magic herbs? does not have to be too crazy even 5x average human or able to lifter 500 lbs and squat 1,000 is a huge advantage. and able to make own artifacts ? from jewlery to cloths ?

Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4Dissapointed_One

Disgusting.

Kishan_Rout_8472
Kishan_Rout_8472Lv1Kishan_Rout_8472