Comments of chapter undefined of Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

A little grammar editing and it would be perfect.

great chapter

MC mad cause the game was more focused in "snu-snu" rather than the story, I mean come on, you're playing an eroge game, what do you expect. . Still interested bout the story so I'mma keep reading.

great chapter you will get hook in it just reading the first chap

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Thank you kindly for the chapter 😁Good start with some similarity to I will kill the author in the part where he was already dreaming of the world he gets sent into but I suspect it will be a lighter tone compared to that story 😜

You want an editor ?

Way better than I expected it to be...

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Thanks for the chappy 👍

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when will this novel start again?

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Author it is finished or u stopped writing this novel pls clarify...Ur other novel so good so I think I will read this too but I think u will not update this 🤐🤐🤔🤔

Thanks for the chapter

Oh gosh, laundry in the kitchen. Not again.

Thanks

great story

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