Comments of chapter undefined of Multiversal Library
Multiversal Library
ExoticSenta
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my opinion on the rewritten: 1) is written with better quality, cleaner sentences, and more meaningful. 2) relationship, or rather their beginning, with Olivia - written much worse, it feels like the world itself forced them to converge. it looks disgusting. Yes, and I would prefer that he did not get himself a permanent partner so early. it's just the 4th world and now 80% of the book will focus on their interaction. I'm not reading this for the romance, but for the plot. 3) it's very good that they thought of adding non-human races, such as a phoenix, a brownie and a basilisk. but now the question arises: why didn’t he save a dozen phoenix feathers, didn’t buy from each existing and available monster in part ??? it would give more variety when choosing additional races, and it also gave both him and his girlfriend new options. why didn't he take a couple vials of wizard blood with him???? in extreme cases, it would be interesting to sell / exchange with others in the library. 4) given that he has the ability to teleport to Gringotts, why not go through all the storages before leaving and pick up the excess? why when he saved sirius he only destroyed the locket but didn't take the library??? as a result - the main character was a fool, and remained so. the quality of writing has become better, but I did not like the idea itself and its implementation. MS misses many good opportunities that will make his future life easier, but no, why, we will OVERCOME. Google translated.
So out of all the girls in the multiverse, it's a rando OC. The more offensive part is going Samurai after passing up Saeko in HOTD. But, even ignoring that, still, random OC for an infinite flow novel? And it's not even an OC from the original world, which would be more logical even if I'm not a fan. Le sigh.
At first I was taken in by the negative reviews, but I have to say that this novel is incredible. I admire the author for having the courage to practice monogamy even though he knew he would lose some readers. I like harems, but with such a well-made construction I can't complain about the unique relationship (I'm using the translator)
