Comments of chapter undefined of My World Anew

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TheAncientOnellLv5TheAncientOnell

the conflict with that young master seem forced to me I mean even the interaction was robotic

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Darkness_DescendsAuthorDarkness_Descends

This is my first novel so it might be a bit rough. But I can take criticism, any pointers you might have for me would be appreciated.

Darkness_Descends:Kelvin?

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Grace_Madu_1899Lv1Grace_Madu_1899

Hope she doesn't get to regret her attitude towards him

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Gaurav_YTLv3Gaurav_YT

thanks author

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