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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece - Thorny Path To Freedom

4Hart
4HartLv14Hart

Im still here to just vote, thankfully im not the only one who seems to think the same way about the story...

thotieslayer
thotieslayerLv5thotieslayer

every one piece character needs a traumatic last😑

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TgNovels
TgNovelsLv14TgNovels

This is quite brutal

dminor101
dminor101Lv14dminor101

going to have to say drop the story here. it is fine for others crosses boundaries for me. I would have preferred to have the kids discover them and make assumptions not read through it. good luck to your writing

Alpha_Idiot
Alpha_IdiotLv4Alpha_Idiot

I really liked your work till now while the few passages where thr writting was clumsy were tolerable but this chapter needs a massive rewritten or has to be taken down. This story would be better without this 'part'

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LE_VAN_VINH
LE_VAN_VINHLv1LE_VAN_VINH

Holy….. this is so brutal mann. Can’t imagine how MC will feel after this

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Syel69
Syel69Lv3Syel69

TFTC 🤙🖖

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RussianMan
RussianManLv2RussianMan

thanks for the chapter!!!

Fryandika_Larung
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