Akkuzz_69
I guess this is where I'm done at the table, I'm to full of cringe and cliche to continue. I wish you would have put a chapter number on when you believe the story got better in that authors note you wrote. The MC is cringe personified, and his interaction with everyone is absolutely annoying/frustrating. Did I mention the MC is cute? Like really cute, just sooo cute, he's so cute you can't imagine, so cute you cant handle it, none can handle it, so cute the universe looses it's shine, so cute the sun dims, so cute it transcends reality, so cute....... Exactly How insecure are you with your appearance author? It's bleeding in HEAVILY into your novel.