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Why Should I Stop Being a Villain

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FactsOnly
FactsOnlyLv15FactsOnly

One, the errors remove the immersion. Two, the memories are too long and much of this could have been skipped over/integrated along with other participants journeys. This will flow better and keep the pacing fast enough. Lastly, if these have memories have no influence on some future plot progression, it would be a big waste. Hopefully not or else my wallet is hurting for nothing 😭

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bings7y
bings7yLv14bings7y

well know Asher will kill them more brutally

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bLinD_VickinG
bLinD_VickinGLv3bLinD_VickinG

I really really would like to understand what's going on. They're called flashbacks because they are fast and they happen along with some plot development. It's good to have a backstory but when it gets too long it messes with the pace of the series and break the immersion. Like some other guy already said "I really hope all this is relevant for the plot".

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Sloth_Archon
Sloth_ArchonLv4Sloth_Archon

Why do I feel like most of this things are what Asher don't know about like he might know overall situation after it happened but not exactly what everyone did. It will undoubtedly make his anger little less

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Itzmeanurag
ItzmeanuragLv15Itzmeanurag

Another meshed up chapter with repeted content

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bings7y
bings7yLv14bings7y

well this is not getting fixed 😮‍💨

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Thelamb
ThelambLv5Thelamb

Thank you for the chapter!

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bings7y
bings7yLv14bings7y

after 11 everyday repetition gets fixed 😮‍💨

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