Raos_IOI
someone is taking the "show dont tell" approach too seriously. i mean, as someone who read ur novel for quite sometime now, with bit of crumbs you left, i think it was more than clear what Asher's past look like and these few chapter is just a repeat of said crumbs you left.
not to mention, you already sold us on to dislike Kevin, Elena and Eva by showing their true hypocrisy in current timeline, and sold us on the lunatic Leonard who want control or just burn the world down if he cant control tendency. this recap of the past showed no purpose beside solidifying things that we already know. it getting tedious and serve no purpose since Asher like us, know this all along