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Comments of chapter undefined of My vampire system: Abraham(fanfiction)

Jonathan_Viau
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did something happen to you ?

GGloserzz_69
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it felt like a lot got skipped and there was sthff from the original needs a lot of editing

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Newnoob
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Bruh the first paragraph is from the original novel when Leo trains Quinn. So it's confusing. The chapter needs editing ASAP

Newnoob
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Yo update the fic Author

DaoistJmQTms
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that sure is a work of art though I feel like some editing is needed.

Apannnn
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Thanks and did something happend since you not post on monday and wednesday?

VectorKVisemen
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Moar

Aaron_Stephens_9638
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praying your alright and can continue writing. if there was a way for me to help you I sure would.

Newnoob
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Update please

Adel_Awwad
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this is so good I wish you can complete it as sonn as you can

Afonso_Aaron
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Thanks for the chapter

OtakuSad0
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TFTC

DarkerEmpathy29
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thanks for the chapter author-nim 🙏