Feniurme
The quality of writing on this fic is insane. Shure, some people might not appreciate the way you string sentences together, but i personally think that's the best part. It gives a bit of an 'old' and slightly foreign flavour. Kinda like a mix between certain high quality translations from JP and old style fairy tales. It's not that hard to speak in a 'down to earth', modern way, but pulling THIS style without going cringe overboard is hard, and i appreciate the effort. If you feel like having a break, take it, don't force yourself. Whatever the annoying and demanding people say, you aren't obliged in any way to anyone. Don't let your hobby turn into a drag, that's how the writer talent dies. Make sure you enjoy what you do.