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Comments of chapter undefined of Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers

Lkun
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I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Lost_Fiction_6031
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normally I don't really like bell insert stories becasue their mostly about them getting every girl. But your story has plot that really catches the reader and I'm really enjoying your story. Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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EMIYA
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I liked how Freya developed here, you give much more context than in the case of Artemis

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diamondfire_shadow
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Thanks for the chapter

victor1997
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Author can you add Scáthach since bell is literally going to the lands of shadow (black desert) plus he will get more op

victor1997
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Bell X scathath

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1Dreamer_Owl
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Nice and thanks for the chapter XD

zeez2020
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Hey I'm kinda curious how would the world react to the ubw when bell eventually uses it !? The gods would probably be the most affected as it's likely a spell that only a mortal could cast as they probably can't build alternate realities due to their rules how precious would they consider Bell's soul that basically contains a pocket reality or any future person with a reality Marple? Likely enough to assure a new age where the gods seek raise mortals into ones with reality Marples (poor bell all the Goddess he will have relationship with will fight over owner ship of his soul Hephaestus is obvious Artemis will see it as the place where she first confirmed her feelings Freya will see it as her skies of freedom Athena well it's an entirely new form of magic Hestia will probably tie it all together with her concept of family and home probably compliment Avalon concept of paradise/utopia I see where you are going lol) as for mortals well ignoring how powerful a reality Marple is the most amazing trait will probably be the fact that it will make the all dangers of the dungeon terrain obsolete by always turning it into favourable terrain the monster rex that fights in the water will likely become a joke with Bell's help finally are you going to base Bell's outfit on oath under snow shirou? It's very suitable for the setting heck even the side headband fits strangely well

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noobstar14213
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Thx for the chapter

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Marcus_whatever
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Gud

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victor1997
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Freya being hug by bell while crying

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victor1997
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Bell reassuring freya

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AlexPendragon
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thanks for the chapter

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Arsene_Holmes
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Thanks for the chapter

IDragonXYZ
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Nice.

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Red_Eclipse_2003
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More please++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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victor1997
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victor1997
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Remembering their time together

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Six_Guns
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Arthur_0034
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author you should add Scathach in this fic

ArgonautLifeLine
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your story is getting more and more interesting each chapter. good luck with the exam and don't forget to take some needed rest. thanks for the chapter