Comments of chapter undefined of Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers

Also... make a chapter wirh the POV of the girls in orario aka, Lili, Tiona and Hephi when they learn gray ghost saved athenas city by fighting a horde of demi spirits and finished off a leviathan. XD.... Tiona will climax right there... and Hephi will pack things up to see the solar sword while Lili will daydream

...wow. That was... some really well written lemon, very vivid without the dialogue bring cringe-worthy My compliments, Fen.

Bell doesn't need to use reinforce in the lemon, right? He has Avalon

Ask penelope for a favor... Bring THESE *LOTS OF LETTERS* To Orario please... (Lili will start to get withdrawal symphtoms)

Athena is like this Kagura (love is war)

Bro is still need bell go to kaios?? Because i don't se bell need go there if can you can make timeskip and if you really want bell explain what he do there you can make side story of there then tou can make real plot bell go to hestia familia

bro make all povs like Aphrodite reaction to Artemis and Athena love life, Hermes reaction, Zeus reaction, media reaction that he was at Atlanta, hera caught Zeus ,hephi to his sword in Atlanta

Hehehehe.... 😅😅😅 Seems like our hero has stepped into the harem rout. I can only imagine what kind of shenanigan of drama will happen when the canon begins. Wait, will Aiz be added? Please say yes, she's my favorite followed by Reveria and more. Keep up the good work, Author-sama!

lets hope Freya doesn't find out, or else...

Noice

take care of yourself because every good author or fanfic writer ends up dying from nor taking care of them selves

At first it seemed interesting because the MC's powers are cool and the author said that despite being a harem, it would build the protagonist's love relationships, so I was hopeful. Imagine the surprise I had when I realized that romance was basically any relevant female character meets the protagonist, there's a little bit of interaction and BOOM they're madly in love and the only reason they won't sleep with the protagonist is because he runs away from them. I don't want to offend the author, but for me this is just ridiculous, all other elements of the story are fine with me, but the romance being the same dense protagonist of a clichéd harem just doesn't go down.

Thanks for the Chapter~!

Thanks for the chapter

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You made me break "Celibacy" that's not done