Comments of chapter undefined of Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers

For some reason, Bell being a mysterious figure (hiding himself) made me lose interest in this fic, well, that's just my opinion.

If Bell becomes a vigilante, won't he be caught when he joins the Hestia Familia? As far as I know, the familia god can read the history of his child's activities srry for the eng i use tl

Chains reminds me of Kratos, so Ghost of Orario? Or maybe the name of a Fate assassin?

Ok everything before coming to the city was fine and I liked the character of the MC. now I am not sure anymore I don't want to cringy between lines man why did he have a hero complex and using cringy lines and why is he so dense I don't know what to think of the fanfic anymore to be honest some annoying characters are getting screentime yes that half-elf is annoying and I dislike her but we'll to each there own I guess. I will stick around for a couple of chapters and see if there any improvements if not I will rate 4 and then drop it.

Odio cuando MC se oculta y finge ser débil

So I got to ask will he also use emiya alters weapons too and also unlimited lost works with the bladed guns?

Question, how would falna affect bell’s ability to project things. Would it only affect things related to that god? Like for example, if bell got his falna from Hephaestus, would he be able to project weapons better/divine constructs(divine constructs don’t need a divine material, all they need is a god to make them to be classified as such). And Hestia is a god of architecture btw if you didn’t know.

He's bringing Scatach and Cu?

'm really enjoying your story so far, but I've noticed some significant issues that need to be addressed. It's normal to make unimportant characters generic, but you seem to be overdoing it. Your "evil Npc" embodies every cliche available, and the way they evilly laugh while proclaiming their plan, actions, and abilities, while reiterating how evil they are, is kind of ridiculous. You can make them as evil as you want, but there's a difference between chaotic evil and cartoonish evil, and your villains are more on the latter end of the spectrum. If you want to explain their abilities or motives, you need to make it more discrete and give them a reason to talk, rather than just having a three-paragraph exposition of their intentions and powers out of the blue

Gray Ghost* Revenant Gray Avenger Death's Shadow Lots of options for names. Do a quick Google search so it's not an unintentional direct lift from somewhere else. I'm leaning more towards the Gray Ghost because he doesn't even leave footprints behind (when he so chooses). I'm getting a lot of Kratos vibes. The chains were big for Spawn too.

I am having trouble understanding this turn of events. Where did he gain his wisdom? He's a 14-year-old boy with the memories of a broken man-child. Additionally, he acted way too familiar with Scaith. While it's understandable that the girl is emotional and Mc wants to console her, he acted way too chummy with her

Iron because when he smells like the blood of his enemy’s

Lâminas com correntes? KRATOS!

Hidden identity? I just lost interest, I honestly don't understand what is the point of creating a double identity, maybe in reality it is viable but this is not reality and as a reader it is not enjoyable, to another novel.

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter! PS: I think Nameless really fits as his alias since this coincides with his actions...

Knightmare Hunter? Underworld Breaker? Limitless Lightbringer? Orario Knightmare? Overload Knightmare?

thanks for the chapter bro ☺️