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Comments of chapter undefined of Multiversal: The Shop

LuminousRequiem
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Need more Ai and Twins Pov chapters!!!!

Marianne_de
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chapter is too short you need to write at least 24 pages of this to satisfy me

Nyx_Celeste
Nyx_CelesteLv6Nyx_Celeste

I can't wait for the twin's POV. If they are reincarnated, I want to know their reaction about their new living lifestyle with their dad. Hehehe

OneeSans_Shota
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Holo_Lover
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I'm enjoying the story, but please, author, don't keep adding girls to the MC's harem every 10 chapters. We don't even have as much building around the girls that the MC already has, so take it easy, that's the problem with pretty much every harem fanfiction I've read, the author gets carried away and adds so many women in the harem, that he ends up without knowing what to do next.

Depressed_Shovel
Depressed_ShovelLv5Depressed_Shovel

IF Ai died, and that's a big mother bloody IF, then Hikaru Kamiki is dead man walking. Because ALEX IS A BARTHOMELOI, and some punk dared to ATTACK his family. That, and resurrection without side effects is like 300?

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Murder_Melody
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Thanks for the Chapter!!! Man... Cliffhanger again...

Holy_Suzuki
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Thanks for the chapter Charlottes

Merlin58
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Thanks for chapter.In this case, who is the next heir? Is it aqua?

Gerier
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ItzZlkiller123
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I NEED MOARRR

GH0STS
GH0STSLv13GH0STS

The real question is, How will Ai react to being part of a harem with a Rockstar, a teleporter, and a Goddess

Yuuki_Ibnu
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Shurasik
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Thanks for the chapter

DaoistJRiBtk
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_Monarch
_MonarchLv14_Monarch

thanks for the chapter

Infinite_Shadow_57
Infinite_Shadow_57Lv14Infinite_Shadow_57

Thanks for the chapter. Its too short though, only thing that really happened was the DNA test. That's all, no real interaction with the Twins or Ai. Which was what I was hoping for.

Darkschneider
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i am frothing right now tiss getting really good 👍 good job author very will made

Nico_Nico_Robin
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ArdaPendragon
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Thanks for chapter.

RogueCrescent
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