SrCuervo
Have you fully read the chinese version and is still basing this on that or is this an original now?
dunno if you even remember me since its been quite some time since i read this fic of yours and gave some stones. i can see the difference in some parts of your story except the part where lori died because of her stupidity which was the same in the cchinese fic. good for you in somehow managing to combine it in your story
SrCuervo:Original writing, I only took into consideration some aspects but everything is written by me.