Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: The Foundation
Marvel: The Foundation
Darkstar_crow
Chapter comments23
it's starting to get boring for me.....MC doesn't feel like MC ...he is just there to summon spc and tell us about it in 2 chapters then his subordinate will do the work behind the scenes .....i expected him to be there and experience capturing them along the way ..it's disappointing
I really like the story, if we want a mc with lots of emotions it won't fit well with the scp leadership position. + this way we get to see the steps needed for a leadership and the journey. He is like a mastermind in shadows, but we need to see things outside of fighting and action as well, for well done world building and story progression. I really love this type of writing since its so unique and exciting. Also anyone who reads SCP knows that you can't really be naive,careless or lets emotions( its a grim dark reality of humans standing up to things far more powerfull than them) play a part in them or..... Well we might just meet a XK end of the world situation.
