Comments of chapter undefined of I Will Kill The Author

Man, this god just killed him 3 times. I know Lucas is going to be mad right now. And I smell a lot of false hood in that gods rants bet he just riled him up so he would stop looking for his memories. I smell a conspiracy.

he wrote the story of this world but sam and lucas are from another world, maybe not lucas but sam is an anomaly

is lucas some kind of fallen god ?

I can't help but think about Lucas Amelias and Seras words in the description

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

I know I'm not close to being done reading this story, but I have a few things to say. first of all the writing is gorgeous so far it's easy to understand but not so easy it gets boring, the writing style aswell is amazing. however as good as this novel may be there are a few things that leaves a bitter taste in my mouth which is just purely my opinion or things I personally would have done writing this story which is basically irrelevant but I just wish some of the hints for future plots were a bit more subtle and that these sudden scene had a bit more build up, this god scene felt quite our of place and sudden which the Samael scenes did too. it feels like you are expecting ro start exploring a mountain just to find our the mountain is actually a volcano going to erupt and kill everyone when you haven't even started exploring yet, a little more build ups and in my perspective this novel would be perfect. I don't want any plot changes, character changes, or anything. The plot is flawless. The characters are amazing, and everything connects. Some things just feel a little sudden. That's it.

Ty

thnx

Thanks for the chapters!

Thank you for the chapter 🥰