Night_Crawler619
no one cares how beautiful these elves are. You are not trying to sell them to us, you only need a couple of words to describe them. don't you think it's too dumb for a 26 year old man to stutter when talking to a girl? In the beginning, he seemed smart and calm to me, but now I don’t think so. The thing that made me laugh the most was how the author tries his best to give us as much information as possible at the very beginning. Although why do this if this world is literally an alternative version of the author pov