This is confusing and the scenes are jumping all over the place. I can’t tell if it’s one guy or two. when did his mom die if she went through the portal with him? It seems like you’re missing sentences in the paragraphs.
it's been a while, but i think I'm up to the pace. In case, you don't know author... i read this novel's first two chapters a long time ago under a different username😅
this is a fake comment section, only one dude is real CAUSE WHAT HE SAID WAS TRUE TF IS THIS, WHY IS THERE A LITTLE BOY IN THE FOREST AND WHAT SHELTER I DIDNT KNOW THERE WAS A SHELTER.