Comments of chapter undefined of Fate/Scp: Epic of The Demiurge

Author no offense but I feel like you are making the same mistakes as you did in the last fic. I believe you should flesh out his first world more before we go onto another as it is his main world(starting point). And the fact that we don’t have a clear understanding of the plot besides are knowledge.P.S you might want to shorten the status panel as it cover a huge part of the ch also take to story slower bulid it up more. You are most likely going to run into the same issues like you did in the last fic.

What about Shinmai maou no testament

dear author with all due respect, the world of anime does not follow the common sense in which we live, they are governed by the logic of the cliche isekai, comedy, harem pokemon, and different kinds of bizarre things, after all that is what They make it fun to read and take an interest in the plot.

Im just gonna leave this comment here: What is the use of vongola hyper intuition if he will get sneak attacked and not dodge it? He did not feel a hint of danger even though it should be always active.

Mr author all due respect there a faw mistakes I Will like to paint out you should make a brief summary about what happened in the world mc want to just to catching up with what happened Second harem oh harem I word I love and hate depends on the story first of all the whole slow and make sense and realistic please throw it out of your head because trying to make those decisions In essentially Omniverse travel story in a world of anime and manga etc world doesn't really the really doesn't follow Common sense and laws of reality is stupid and depends on the world it makes sense if quick love relationship to happen because it can by fiction logic doing these things you mentioned it just shooting yourself in the leg any girl he summon won't have a problem with sharing because you need special kind stupid to put Common sense In a world that doesn't follow Common sense and specially a guy who by some standards a god specially said god who brought you a cross reality to different world as for soul eater girls I say why not In a world governed by madness anything is possible because it fiction logic and there my best wifus In there you don't forget why harem existence for the our best wifus In fiction so don't do something stupid by limiting because common sense and realistic In fiction world in a specially In Omniverse travel story because it once again stupid ok thanks for listening My opinion and ranting about these things

sulpher from mana khemia

nice chapter

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter 😊

Thanks for chapter

TFTC

you should go to scp verse at the last cause that verse is infinite and infinite dimension, worlds, realm etc. that verse is way more chaotic and unpredictable than dc and marvel verse combined together

Mc got too op too fast for beginner world now it feels boring to read gonna drop.

Thanks for the chapter