hmm.... how do I say it?......u should probably make system abit different from the GOAT novel and also his past life should be explored abit more to give bit more depth to his character other then that i will say u are doing a great job.
Why is he a grade-F talent? Wasn't he supposed to be a promising young footballer? Or is he considered a grade-F by the system but not by others? You don't need to answer these questions, author.