ranmaro
This needs some serious proofreading. Misspelled or repeated words and poor sentence structure make this a painful read. It could be that English is not the author's language, but then they need better translators. I stopped after the first couple paragraphs. Maybe this is a good story, but I'd rather not have to stop and think about what the author is trying to say every couple sentences.
I still don't know if the spirits here are the same as what I'm used to but if so I'm really tired of suors putting mythological animals like the mc's summon, battlespirit and all that stuff, like y'all can't innovate? What's interesting about immediately giving the strongest spirit or the greatest potential to the mc? none, I like OP characters but there's nothing interesting about a character being OP because he just happened to get the strongest spirit or whatever, I'd rather have him get a bad or just average and be smart and creative in using it knowing how get the most power out of him, I'd rather the mc's power come from the mc himself and his hard work than something stupid like that I'm giving my opinion based only on the first chapter so I could be wrong but I probably am not since the fox's blood got on it... ugh bruh a fox with nine tails, you've been watching too much naruto man