Comments of chapter undefined of The White Knight[Asoiaf Si]

Nice to see Ulf finally moving one but like another comment said, i hope nothing bad will come out of it...Anyways, i'm still hoping that Ulf will be legitimized for his deeds and finally be able to ride Silverwing without hiding...

My boys ulf finally lost his virginity 😄, let's hope the author doesn't somehow make this a bad thing.

white knight dies and black knight is born

I think like drunk Ulf more then I like sober Ulf,he is far more entertaining drunk.Other then that,I find it ironic that Ulf has the strength to end it,but could not move on from it,when Helaena didn’t have the strength to end it,but had the strength to move on from it,they parallel each other.The only nick pick that I have with the letter is how did Helaena know that Ulf was suffering so much when they had not seen each other in years.It’s not like any of Ulf’s side of the room,friends and allies alike,would talk to the greens about,so how did she know,or even guess that his sorrow was about her?

Nice chapter

great chapter

Now that Ulf has finally gotten laid can you stop having him pretend to care about Helaena?

how has your writing not gotten any better