I don't really like the development here specifically altrouge. Seems like he's getting bossed by everyone he meets. I think it's just me though. So keep up the good work.
Tnx for the chapter. And also please use bracket or parenthesis when they are talking in their mind because it gets really confusing whether they are talking with their mouth or their mind.
Just a suggestion, you might want to use something like <example> for when they talk telepathically, since it's a little confusing atm to differentiate between a normal paragraph and a telepathic conversation.
