Comments of chapter undefined of Forgemaster: My Legendary Weapons Turn Max Level Automatically
Forgemaster: My Legendary Weapons Turn Max Level Automatically
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M4dScientistLv14M4dScientist
Ugh! Grab an Editor, ASAP! (Consider one of your first published sentence fragments, incomplete and crossing into another paragraph for possible starting points.) As for the story itself, Lin doesn’t recall when/how he transmigrated?! Was he two or younger? And is he currently 12 (one reference) or 18? Is he looking forward to being tested, based on one section, or recovering & implementing a fallback plan after failing, based on another? I’m confused, at least about this story. 1/5 Stars in present state, based on Chapter One.
