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Comments of chapter undefined of In the movie worlds with my system

MasterShadow
MasterShadowLv11MasterShadow

Movie recommendation: Everything Everywhere All At Once

ULLMANthe1APOSTLE
ULLMANthe1APOSTLELv2ULLMANthe1APOSTLE

Good work bro and don't worry i think most of us would not have any problems with English as we people have often read Chinese novels and everybody knows how there english is the story is good and thanks for posting.

Akisu
AkisuLv13Akisu

Ugh, huge walls of text with most commas, dots, question marks, and exclamation marks missing, not to mention the missing capital letters... =/

Pekokopiko
PekokopikoLv13Pekokopiko

It's like i'm reading some butchered version of Terror Infinity

Lycarus
LycarusLv2Lycarus

Harém or no harem? I hate harem

Karma_198
Karma_198Lv4Karma_198

Everyone starts somewhere. I won't Curse you for blowing my mind with the first para, but I'll advise you, to try and use punctuation marks to end a sentence. Use exclamation and question marks to show emotions. You can also use comma and 'and' in a sentence to make them prim and proper. I can tell you're fast paced due to your excitement to put out those chapters as fast as possible, but a little effort improves the quality by a lot. I will come back later when the story is readable by my standards. The system shard concept is good.

Paulo_D_Manoel
Paulo_D_ManoelLv10Paulo_D_Manoel

dude, can you pls use pontuation? Jesus Christ.

Maizuky_Nichan
Maizuky_NichanLv13Maizuky_Nichan

Hum...

Silva2B
Silva2BLv4Silva2B

I think to start you need to learn what periods are and maybe what to capitalize lol. If you don’t want to have to double check everything grammarly is highly recommended be people.

GraySerpent
GraySerpentLv3GraySerpent

When an author is so lazy as to not even utilise punctuation; I hold no expectations of their 'work' being good, none at all.

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

I hate System and Cultivation World except for some rare cases like Solo Leveling,Playing Firebending,I got reincarnated in the world of Attack on Titan as a Baby and only some specific cultivation novels I like such as Swallowed Star,Martial World etc.

Donald_Duckk
Donald_DuckkLv5Donald_Duckk

Yui_Sealfat
Yui_SealfatLv3Yui_Sealfat

Mummy Gold Gold GoldMagic Magic Magic

HHKing
HHKingLv14HHKing

I've to start over again. can't recall this fic. was above chapter 100, brain damages getting me again 😔

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

SergeiWatochekzab
SergeiWatochekzabLv1SergeiWatochekzab

Jean_R_6763
Jean_R_6763Lv2Jean_R_6763

Gostei da sinopse 😉

Uzumaki_Kushina_21
Uzumaki_Kushina_21Lv5Uzumaki_Kushina_21

is this mtl or original

URA_NUU
URA_NUULv1URA_NUU

Merci pour le chapitre

chichi32310
chichi32310Lv13chichi32310

He needs to stop saying the system and just say system