DreamTales
You butchered Coiling Dragon. I don't get why, and I'm truly disappointed. Good luck, author. The story isn't bad apart from changing the ogs which is really infuriating.
Haha, CD characters hold a special place in my heart since it was one of the first novels I read, I don't think I will continue since it seems Linley and the others will be the Young Master type. Still your writing is really good, and it was really enjoyable (besides the character changes), so good luck on your story. I asked a question regarding romance in one of the reviews, you can ignore it now.