Kirito_K5
It's their right to express disgust ,though the user u replied to compared your novel to one of the best animes in existence and you're being ungratefulđ such bad story... Can't bother.
Kirito_K5:First, I am also not proud of how the beginning turned out, secondly, you can just as easily drop this book if it's not to turn liking, commenting to satisfy yourself is not necessary