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Comments of chapter undefined of Freedom Path: The World of Deva

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James_Pouder
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sorry the story is too drawn out and choppy, and there is no clear indication of who the MC is. its just chapter after chapter of useless uninteresting filler. not my kind of thing.

James_Pouder
James_PouderLv15James_Pouder

Not necessarily just way too unfocused for my personal reading.

ChampionAsta:Is the book bad?

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ChampionAsta
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It's more focused where I am.